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Crossroads Trigger

When the summer's over, dark clouds hide the sun
Here are the fruits of field and mine
Wanting use when all is said and done

Learning to walk the spring, the summer run
Read the deeds of those behind
Prepare for when the clouds will hide the sun

Many crossroads trigger we walk, choose your gun
Decide your line of fire, many chosen blind
Only what's behind is seen when all is said and done

Of economists and politicians bleat I've wanted none
Nor will I suffer under piety's shrine
Because no one is to blame when all is said and done

In spring I write my works of one
As the autumn sunset beckons to mind
There's no hurry anymore when all is said and done

The smokes and winds of fools we shun
But the question is always there to remind
What harvest will be had when the clouds hide the sun
Who will I be when all is said and done?
the title refers to all the choices we make in our lives that affect us, from whether to get coffee one morning to the person you're going to marry. All these choices are a crossroads with alternatives spreading to the horizon. When you decide and pull the trigger you head down that road to the next crossroads.

Also this is about my fear of the future. Anyway I hope you enjoyed this and please tell me what you think
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ticktickboom24 Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2011
the crossroads are often hard to define, but you managed it. well done. have a cookie. :cookie: :cookie:
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tattoofuzzy Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2011
Thank you! I'm guessing you liked it?
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ticktickboom24 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2011
yesh, i dids.
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tattoofuzzy Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2011
Coolio!
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Nico-Eez-Awesome Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011
Powerful, wow. You did a great job on putting the complexity of life in there. Well, could see it. I really can feel the emotions as I'm reading, and I could conjure up images. That means you did a great job. Like I said for the other one, great job, keep it up!
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tattoofuzzy Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2011
I try really hard to paint images with my writing. Or at least images deeply connected to emotions. Thank you very much, I'm so glad you enjoyed it
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Nico-Eez-Awesome Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2011
Well, you have done an excellent job.
You're welcome!
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:icontattoofuzzy:
tattoofuzzy Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2011
:hug: Thank you for taking the time to read it, hopefully I'll have more poems posted soon.
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Nico-Eez-Awesome Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2011
You're very welcome, I don't mind! :) And I hope so. :D
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tattoofuzzy Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2011
We'll see how it goes. Hopefully at some point I'll get my own computer to post with and won't need to borrow other peoples.
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